Fundraising

Investor Outreach Cold Email Example

Cold email to investors example that gets meetings. Shows how to lead with traction, demonstrate thesis fit, and stand out in a VC's inbox.

The Scenario

A seed-stage B2B SaaS founder reaches out to a VC partner who has invested in similar companies. The startup has meaningful traction and is raising their seed round.

The Email

SUBJECT LINE
CloudSecure - $85k MRR, B2B security
Hi Michael,

I'm the founder of CloudSecure. We help mid-market companies automate cloud security compliance.

Traction:
- $85k MRR, growing 22% month-over-month
- 45 customers including Dropbox, Instacart, and Notion
- $0 in paid acquisition - 100% inbound/referral
- NRR: 135%

Why now: SOC 2 and ISO 27001 compliance became table stakes for selling to enterprise. The market grew from $2B to $8B in 3 years, and existing tools (Vanta, Drata) are focused on SMB. Mid-market is underserved.

Why you: Your investment in Snyk and LaceworkHQ shows your thesis around developer-first security tools. We're building the same playbook for compliance.

We're raising a $3M seed led by Jason Lemkin (committed), looking for one more partner.

20 minutes to discuss?

Lisa Chen
Founder & CEO, CloudSecure

Why It Works

  • 1Subject line leads with most impressive metric
  • 2Traction is specific and impressive (MRR, growth rate, logos)
  • 3NRR shows strong product-market fit
  • 4Clear market thesis and why now
  • 5Demonstrates knowledge of VC's portfolio
  • 6Social proof from committed investor
  • 7Specific ask (20 minutes)

Key Elements Breakdown

OPENING

Direct - company and what they do in one line

VALUE PROPOSITION

Growing fast in a large, underserved market

SOCIAL PROOF

Customer logos, Jason Lemkin commitment, 135% NRR

CALL TO ACTION

Specific time ask - 20 minutes

Common Mistakes to Avoid

  • Leading with the idea instead of traction
  • No numbers or vague numbers ("growing fast")
  • No thesis alignment with the VC
  • Asking for more time than needed
  • Not demonstrating why now

Variations to Try

  • Reference a recent blog post or tweet from the VC
  • Lead with a specific thesis statement
  • Include a deck link for convenience

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